“RING RING” I HEAR THE phone ring. “hello” I answer. “hey tessa” the girl replied. The girl was my bff Victoria. “hey girl whats up” I reply. “ok so graduation is tonight so we should go shopping for dresses for the party” Victoria stated. “ok ill meet you at the mall at 3:00 see ya” I said and then hung up. I ran upstairs to my bedroom to get changed. I slide on a cute pair of sevens jeans and a blue Armani exchange halter top. Then I run to my bathroom which is crowded with hair products and makeup. I quickly tie my long red hair back and put on a dab of mascara then run back downstairs. I grab up droid and dile fredreick’s number. Fredreick is my driver. “hello”I hear is thick French accent. “hey fredreick can u pull up the car outside? Im meeting Victoria at the mall.” I hang up. As im waiting for fredreick to pull up I get a text from justin.
Justin:hey wtch doin
Me: ntin much bout to head to mall
Justin:u going to the grad party
Me: yea
Justin great c ya there
Justin my closest guy friend he as dark thick curly hair and tan skin. I’ve known him since I was 6. I here fredriecks horn honk and I run out the door.
Our ton’s mall is huge. It is 2 story and has pretty much every shop you can think of. I see Victoria standing bye the fountain in the center. She has a dirty blond bob and is thin but has mucles at the same time. “hey” she waves me over,”ok were gonna hit neiman marcus first and then saks” “can we go to sephora too? I have a gift card I need to spend” I ask pulling out the gift card. First we stop at neiman. We go straight to the juniors section. We both pull out at least 10 dresses and run to the dressing room. Victoria tries on her dresses first. She comes out first in a blood red Oscar de la renta long gown. “that ones ok but its not the best,”I say not impressed. She goes back in and comes out in a stunning baby blue ninna ricci mini dress. “that’s the dress for you. Now my turn.” I say rushing into the dressing room. I try on a bunch of dresses and decide on a light green dolce and gabbana mini dress with sequins around the collar. We then stopped at saks and sephora but we bought nothing there.
I was walking with a long line of graduates to the stage as the called out names. Finally I heard my name called as I got up and grabbed my diploma I looked out into the crowd and saw my parents they looked so proud. I saw Victoria there too. She had already gotten her diploma and she was clapping really loudly. At the end we all threw are hats up in the air. Then me and Victoria went back to my house to get ready for the party. We did are hair and makeup and got in our dresses. Then fredreick came and drove us to the party
The party was a madhouse. Music was playing, lights were flashing, people were dancing. “im gonna go look around” Victoria said then disappeard into the crowd. I started dancing around for a while. I needed to go to the bathroom so I started to search for it. on my way there I passed a storage closet. It smelled like smoke. I opened the door and there was a huge fire inside. “oh no” I thought,” it will only be a matter of time before it spreads. I have to get every one out of here” I ran back to the dance room and shouted,”everybody fire you have to get out” everybody started rushing to the door. “wait” I said “calm down. Every body go one at a time and will all make it out. Half of the people were out when I could smell the smoke getting closer. Finally everybody got out. I started walking to the door when I remembered Victoria was still in the house. I ran around opening doors and shouting her name. “wait” I thought there will only be time for one of us to get out. I have to save Victoria” finally I found her. She looked scared to death. “Run Victoria you have to get out” I shouted “what about you” she asked. I just smiled. She ran while I slowed the fire down. Victoria ran to the door, but when I got there the fire and blocked the door. The fire surrounded me. As it burned down around me I smiled and I tear shed down my face. “goodbye” I whispered.
Tuesday, July 13, 2010
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